Copper Wire

Does your writing lack power,

 is it merely verbose,

as you labor line to line

 

Is the message red meat

or a vegan’s delight,

its essence so defined

 

Each word as an arrow

that strikes for the heart,

its tip to preordain

 

The strength of the meaning

abandoning all

—when destined to explain

 

(Dreamsleep: January, 2022)

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